Pitch critique :

Atomix pitch overall went pretty well but i had to work on my presentation skills as i was coming over at judges table a lot from the Pitch computer , i should have stayed at the PC and narrated the pitch story from there itself.

Also the Pitch would have worked even better if it had an example of digital touch point screen to show the judges what Atomix could look like visually.

I should have made flash cards with pitch notes to make the pitch presentation even better , i had plans to input AI voiced George RR Martin , JK Rowling , and Stan Lee as if they were selling Atomix pitch on screen and how easier their life could have been working in the creative industry if they had Atomix in their hands , but that is speculation and some people might not like using that idea even if it is humours in nature.